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algorhythm · Post by **algorhythm** » Sat May 25, 2002 7:56 am

<a name="planetz-file"></a><a href="http://www.algorhythmz.com/audio/artist ... .mp3"><img src="/forums/images/listen_icon.gif" border="0" alt=" Song"> Song</a> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: I dunno . . . <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects,Pulsar Synths copyright Â© YYYY your-name-here _____________________________________ hello - here is an early beta version of a track I am working on. getting frustrated. I think that I have been working on it too much lately. I'm taking a break for a few days - please reply and help me clarify what needs fixed when I go back to finish - Sorry it is almost 10MB, it is about 10 minutes long . . . No intro or conclusion yet . . .

- BTW - it is about 80% composed/sequenced, 20% mixed and 0% mastered -
Is it too long?
is it uninteresting?
Is the 303ish line OK, or does it not fit?
Is the melody at 6:30 OK or kinda cheezy? or both?
thx in advance ya'all - I appreciate it.

cook · Post by **cook** » Sat May 25, 2002 12:41 pm

You're obviously well on your way, Algo.

I reckon you're not going to add much when you come back, but will start clearing it - it's already everything there and alright, but can became clearer.
Just my guess where you will go! (Update! Interested watching you.

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Me enjoyed!

algorhythm · Post by **algorhythm** » Sat May 25, 2002 2:27 pm

you are right cook - I filled it up (too)good - it is a mess. that was why I asked the above questions? which parts don't make the cut? now it is time strip away till only the essense remains. thanks for listening.

anyone else? - I'd like to finish this over the long weekend in USA, and your comments will be very helpful.

[ This Message was edited by: algorhythm on 2002-05-25 16:17 ]

borg · Post by **borg** » Sun May 26, 2002 10:43 am

just a quick one, and i had to listen to the track on a very crappy system (mine

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the length seems not a problem, maybe 4 bars less here and there...
imo, maybe change the amp envelope of the bass a bit in the second bass line.
the 'cheesy' part is not over the top, i think.

i'll have to listen to it on a good sound system before vomiting more stupidities.

Nestor · Post by **Nestor** » Wed May 29, 2002 9:03 am

Hello Algo! I am not versed in this kind of music, and precisely because of that, my point of view can be interesting, contrasting with those of people being into it.

I would like it shorter with a building up introduction and a building out end, I can’t imagine a formal end to it, it would be abrupt cos is such an embracing atmosphere.

The mixing spectrum is too tight, so sounds seems to be too close together and can’t breath ear in between, especially some middle sounds too front-edged that collide. I don’t think you need to simplify it, but I would certainly go with softer timbers to differentiate them, as long as your inspiration and creativity are not checkmate with that.

As always, and with all this atmosphere representations, I would like to hear a melody on top of it, but I’m not talking forcefully about something conventional, anything leading as or intending to, suggest a melody, it could be even a breath... anything.

Nice atmosphere, quite grave, like walking through the Bronx at night, implies some danger to me. I wait to hear the final version.