Hello Algo! I am not versed in this kind of music, and precisely because of that, my point of view can be interesting, contrasting with those of people being into it.
I would like it shorter with a building up introduction and a building out end, I can’t imagine a formal end to it, it would be abrupt cos is such an embracing atmosphere.
The mixing spectrum is too tight, so sounds seems to be too close together and can’t breath ear in between, especially some middle sounds too front-edged that collide. I don’t think you need to simplify it, but I would certainly go with softer timbers to differentiate them, as long as your inspiration and creativity are not checkmate with that.
As always, and with all this atmosphere representations, I would like to hear a melody on top of it, but I’m not talking forcefully about something conventional, anything leading as or intending to, suggest a melody, it could be even a breath... anything.
Nice atmosphere, quite grave, like walking through the Bronx at night, implies some danger to me. I wait to hear the final version.
