This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <BR><BR><a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Prog/Classic<BR> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects,Pulsar Mixers,Pulsar Synths,Korg 03R/W Yamaha MU90 Pro-52 etc.<BR> copyright © 2002 by Herr Voigt<BR> _____________________________________<BR><BR> A song from my CD I'm working for some years. A little bit old style, but I like the big-orchestral sound of the Prog-Rock of the 70s.
The lyrics were written by Georg Heym, a german expressionist from the beginning of the 20th century.
Perhaps somebody likes it.
Enjoy, Thomas
Hymne
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Nestor
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Common, of course we like it! I don’t like much the voice perhaps, too soft? I’m missing much a distorted guitar on the background to reach what you like, the sound those great old groups.
Nice work with the drums… you went sort of Ravel inspired there…
It’s a very nice song in all. Is it your final version? I think you can do something real big and extraordinary with this, but the instruments are not completely suitable to my own taste. Most of all cos there is not a distorted guitar, which would give a tremendous force to the structure. Then… the panning it’s all centred, I mean, there is no differentiation and so the whole mass of sound is in the same place, so it’s difficult for it to bread. This is needed especially if you build such a thick mass of sounds.
I really like your song very much, what I said, is rather about timbers, instruments, mixing and mastering, but the creative side is great!
Nice work with the drums… you went sort of Ravel inspired there…
It’s a very nice song in all. Is it your final version? I think you can do something real big and extraordinary with this, but the instruments are not completely suitable to my own taste. Most of all cos there is not a distorted guitar, which would give a tremendous force to the structure. Then… the panning it’s all centred, I mean, there is no differentiation and so the whole mass of sound is in the same place, so it’s difficult for it to bread. This is needed especially if you build such a thick mass of sounds.
I really like your song very much, what I said, is rather about timbers, instruments, mixing and mastering, but the creative side is great!
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Herr Voigt
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Thank you, Nestor, for your friendly response and your tips.
In the mix there IS a distorted guitar, but it comes from the Korg 03R/W synth, and it's better you don't hear it too clear. It would be better if I had a real played guitar track, but I can't play guitar, only keys. But I wanted to make all of the song alone.
My voice is really a bit too lyric, but I have no dramatic and rough voice. But I didn't want to lie with my voice, I wanted to sing as my voice is. Maybe my respect during standing by the mic was too big.
I will try something with the pan of some instruments, perhaps I get the song broader and clearer.
Greetz, Thomas
In the mix there IS a distorted guitar, but it comes from the Korg 03R/W synth, and it's better you don't hear it too clear. It would be better if I had a real played guitar track, but I can't play guitar, only keys. But I wanted to make all of the song alone.
My voice is really a bit too lyric, but I have no dramatic and rough voice. But I didn't want to lie with my voice, I wanted to sing as my voice is. Maybe my respect during standing by the mic was too big.
I will try something with the pan of some instruments, perhaps I get the song broader and clearer.
Greetz, Thomas
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Neil B