now listen to this!

Gordon Gekko · Post by **Gordon Gekko** » Mon Mar 25, 2002 4:53 pm

This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Electronic copyright © 2002 laurent molini _____________________________________ lots o work still but hey, comments please

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Valium · Post by **Valium** » Mon Mar 25, 2002 5:08 pm

Well hello,

I didn't listen to the whole thing but although at 0:21 there was a MSN message coming up the part I listened to sounds promising, keep it up

;)

Greetz

Gordon Gekko · Post by **Gordon Gekko** » Mon Mar 25, 2002 5:32 pm

yeah i was encrypting it while talking to a friend.. guess it makes a good protection too lol

marcuspocus · Post by **marcuspocus** » Mon Mar 25, 2002 7:03 pm

Ah Ah Ah Ah Ah!!!!

Great one legros!

Encoding MSN in your songs now !

marcuspocus · Post by **marcuspocus** » Mon Mar 25, 2002 7:06 pm

Well, anyway, except this MSN thingy, it sound ok, but i find that it has a lot of mid! This hihat is alot too up front... Put it back a bit using comp & PEQ4, it eat up totaly the rest of the song, to the point that the bass line is inaudible, an that's too bad. I don't know how you've done the mix, but there's also alot of isssss, almost agressive to the ear.

Anyway, don't give up!

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Gordon Gekko · Post by **Gordon Gekko** » Tue Mar 26, 2002 7:10 am

Absolutely right Marcus, just following Ken's idea to post without waiting until the song is finished. Dunno how to remove iss from the lead vocal though any suggestions?

paulrmartin · Post by **paulrmartin** » Tue Mar 26, 2002 8:52 am

Run your Wav file with the vocal line through CoolEdit or something such. It works for me

coc999 · Post by **coc999** » Tue Mar 26, 2002 1:53 pm

hi le "fat",i enjoy the rythm it is jumpin!
maybe a thought for percussions,maybe somethin to do?
(are they scratched?seems to be a vynil injection yes:) yeepaa

Post by **garyb** » Thu Mar 28, 2002 12:05 am

critisisms always suggest that one knows what the other was attempting.with that knowledge, one can give advice or critique.one can judge how well that purpose was realized.anything else is just another opinion,interesting,maybe,but not really helpful in achieving that purpose. just continue your work. it's cool.............

Post by **hubird** » Sun Mar 31, 2002 7:03 am

not bad, but I don't like it at all, my first thought was: is this serious? sorry

Let There Be Music!

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Nestor · Post by **Nestor** » Mon Apr 01, 2002 12:23 am

Quite nice song and voices. But the mix is really bad. If the mix was done I think it'll swing nicely. Too much middle, strident hats, very skinny bass line. I would like very, very much some percussion hits behind it as the song rises, and diffidently, a good B3 with a little distortion would be extremely suitable to the texture of the song. I think it's a nice song in general, despite the fact I don't like this stile of music myself.

cook · Post by **cook** » Mon Apr 01, 2002 2:09 am

Legros, I think you're right - a lot of work, and I think, well worth! Your song reminds me of the early 'Violent Femmes', and I listened a lot to it (till I can sing along...).
Since that word of Frank Zappa ('If you go to a Rolling Stones concert, you get a blow-job, if you come to one of mine, you won't!') I watch this when listening to male singers

I must say I love your crazy, expressional singing a lot! Humorous and a very nice voice too! (But I can imagine some machos that are into hard stuff reacting reluctantly...)
Hopefully you will find the space and time to work some more on it (although it's so fresh and good like it is). I would replace the (clean) guitar with an old, special sounding dreadnought, the bass too though it's quite OK. The song is written and sung masterly, the instruments should be played too.
Thanks!

Gordon Gekko · Post by **Gordon Gekko** » Tue Apr 02, 2002 3:33 am

Thanks guys, really appreciate the input. You know how it gets when working too much on a song? i fucked it up so badly that i decided to go on with another tune

peace