the bass is super loud and everything else is super quiet. the 303 line is almost inaudible. I do not know if you meant this, but you achieved it. It sounds like it wants to be harder than it is - ie; 909 kick - but maybe that is just me.
hi,i think you have find the right word
"it wants to be louder than it is".
i will work the bass and the kick again.
maybe post it another time to show the progression for this loop:)
Just a few thoughts..
Sounds very "raw" to me. Might wanna try some delays.. or something. Also either get the piano dude to play the chords an octave lower or add some more harmonic elements so you get more tonal rhythm going on.
As for the drums, maybe adding some mid-passed percussion underlining off-count beats is a quick treatment. (ie brazilian percus and stuff)
And by the way, where's this going? Is it going in a "hard" direction? or a "soft" direction?And finally... are you SURE you want to stick to one chord??
i'm really in the mood for this now (about six in the evening on a saturday), it's really ok! but indeed a lot of stuff can be done and you'll get a good track.
i'd defenitly change the bass sound (use goofy, free dl on Z, for instance) maybe the piano could be changed into something bell sound like with, as ken already said, some delay, the kick might be turned down a bit,... but i'm in your flow.
reminds me of these japanese guys (ken ishi, riou (great minimal techno)). i think i'm gonna put in the machine right now...
thank you guyz for replys i come in your direction,a friend of mine is ok to play percussions on it,he's playin a kind of really good percussion a wood piece called "lokole" in central africa.I will put also some piece of guitar,now i have to devellope this track i think lot of work to make it sound well but as soon as i will finish i put it again to have some comments:)he he he
ps:i go to try the goofy(hope it works on mac).
bye now i go to make the pulsar rockkkk:)
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