Song with vocals

Bracelet Z · Post by **Bracelet Z** » Mon Apr 19, 2004 11:33 am

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Here is the song of mine. Not finished (a half of it) and still without vocals. But I would like to hear some critics, suggestions and so on, to help me to make mastering without vocals. Just for fun:)

P.S. There is some mud in low frequencies...

Thanks for all of You!

Sincerely,
Bracelet Z

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kensuguro · Post by **kensuguro** » Mon Apr 19, 2004 11:38 am

interesting sonic architecture. Really "future" sounding. I'm wonderin if a buildup of some sort would compliment the structure of the song. (somewhere where the harmony becomes thick)

I also thought the low end is just fine as it is. depends how heavy you want it to sound, but the mix sounds clean and a bit "scientific", complimenting the mood of the song very nicely. Cool concept!

Bracelet Z · Post by **Bracelet Z** » Tue Apr 20, 2004 7:34 am

Hi kensuguro,

thank You. Hmm, then maybe it sounds a little too scietific...?

I also forgot to write, what I've used:

AKAI, VSTi, VST plug-ins, XTC Miniscope MKII and some XTC plug-ins.

Bracelet Z

gustav · Post by **gustav** » Tue Apr 20, 2004 8:20 am

good original ideas
futurist - I'm waiting for the complete song

Bracelet Z · Post by **Bracelet Z** » Sun Apr 25, 2004 1:46 pm

Hi guys!

I have updated the file. Now here is all the song, but still without vocals. And I've changed the bass sound.

Sincerely,
Bracelet Z

gustav · Post by **gustav** » Tue Apr 27, 2004 2:48 am

I allways like it very much
just a subjectif critics : I find the transition at 1:45 a little bit too hard

AudioIrony · Post by **AudioIrony** » Tue Apr 27, 2004 11:41 am

Love the sounds and the treatment to the drum track.
Always enjoy listening to something a little different.
cheers

Bracelet Z · Post by **Bracelet Z** » Thu Apr 29, 2004 5:06 am

Thank You guys!

What do You, Gustav, exactly mean about: " the transition at 1:45 a little bit too hard"? There is a quite space.

Sincerely,
Bracelet Z

Bracelet Z · Post by **Bracelet Z** » Mon May 10, 2004 5:38 am

Hey,

At last I've recorded vocals for this song. Ofcourse, not so as I wished, but...

So, tell me everything what You, guys, think about it.

Sorry, not in English. Yet...

Sincerely,
Bracelet Z

bassdude · Post by **bassdude** » Mon May 10, 2004 7:10 am

Geez there's some clever stuff coming out of pulzarians lately.

Canzerboy · Post by **Canzerboy** » Fri May 14, 2004 8:27 pm

Really coool!

Original and nice sounding, like the stuttering flanger/chorus consept. The panning is also very orgiginal.

(wich language is it in?, I don't understand but it is very lovely)

Nice mixing, not too much bass tho but it does not need it either as it would be too strange for the dancefloor hehehe

Bring us more of what you got please

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AudioIrony · Post by **AudioIrony** » Fri May 14, 2004 8:57 pm

Clever, interesting and new. Getting dangerously close to the "too much going on" syndrome now with the added vocals - but it still manages to hold interest.

Have you heard a guy that calls himself "LB" ? kinda reminds me a tiny bit of his work - not so much the vocals, just the way you have treated the drums - which I still like very much.

just a snippet I found - this blew me away

lb (aka Lassigue Bendthaus) is none other than Uwe Schmidt, the man who did a whole album of Latin versions of Kraftwerk songs under the name Señor Coconut.

Bracelet Z · Post by **Bracelet Z** » Sat May 15, 2004 10:29 am

Thank You - bassdude, Canzerboy, blgrace:)

This song is in Lithuanian.

I will pay attention, blgrace, on your comment about vocals:)

But I've never heard the guy called LB. Where could I find his music?

Sincerely,
Bracelet Z

Canzerboy · Post by **Canzerboy** » Sat May 15, 2004 7:09 pm

He he my saxplayer is Lihuanian so I'll ask if he can translate the lyrics and give it a comment tomorrow

I like it more, the more I hear it

Liquid EDGE · Post by **Liquid EDGE** » Sat May 15, 2004 10:42 pm

Cool track. scientific is good.. i perticualy like the aphex twin type stutter in the beat that sparsly accurs.

i agree with blgrace about it sounding almost like to much at certain points. maybe cut down on vocals in certain areas.
minor nigle though.

i like the fact that the singing isn't english aswell

NICE Track

roberflas · Post by **roberflas** » Thu May 20, 2004 2:28 pm

Oh!, I'm very surprised with this song, I think in make a one song in this style.
Really cool, do you like collaborate with me in one song?
I'm very gratefully if you do.

Gonzo69 · Post by **Gonzo69** » Thu May 20, 2004 6:42 pm

Bracelet Z, "tavo mintys" is the most whirling song in my winamp during these days! Applauds for your music and HER vocal!

Da One Really Great Job!!..

Bracelet Z · Post by **Bracelet Z** » Fri May 21, 2004 7:44 am

Thank You: Canzerboy, Liquid EDGE, Roberflas, Gonzo69.

I am really surprised:)

Roberflas, yes, I would like to collaborate with with You!:) Thank You!

Sincerely,
Bracelet Z

roberflas · Post by **roberflas** » Tue May 25, 2004 2:41 pm

I send you a mail to adress that you own here

King of Snake · Post by **King of Snake** » Tue Jun 01, 2004 11:37 am

This is very original, without losing it's musicality. Nothing really to add, this is great!