Same old building

Alan Lauris · Post by **Alan Lauris** » Fri Jan 16, 2004 10:31 am

This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Electronic <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects,Pulsar Mixers,Pulsar Synths copyright © Lauris/Coughlan _____________________________________ New song!! first collaboration with lyricist John Coughlan. Used Prisma for the bass-sound and added some sounds from the Chicago-subway. More Pulsar-made songs on my site http://www.alanlauris.com.

Nestor · Post by **Nestor** » Fri Jan 16, 2004 9:11 pm

Your bass does not work, sorry.

I liked the song very much, everything in fact, except the bass. I think it is too persistent, I mean, the preset you have chosen. I would like definitely, some deep bass, the patters makes it tiresome. It is a shame, cos the song is just perfect. It is nice for relaxing and enjoying the moment... but this bass is far too persistent and your voice looses a bit its own presence.

I would change exclusively the preset, not the bass line, cheers

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[ This Message was edited by: Nestor on 2004-02-03 21:54 ]

Alan Lauris · Post by **Alan Lauris** » Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:53 am

Thanx for your comment, I'll consider trying another preset.

The link didn't work indeed, this is the right one:
http://www.alanlauris.com

Submarine · Post by **Submarine** » Sat Jan 17, 2004 8:55 am

Well,i like this song,good voice record,i like the Bass preset too but it can be for me
-3/-4dB slighter.Good melody too.Well done.

Post by **Neil B** » Thu Jan 22, 2004 2:36 am

This is excellent. I really like this and your recent "Wet Kisses" track.
The mix is excellent (as it stands).
I don't like the bass patch as Nestor said and after a time I found the side stick beginning to sound like a click track, but that is my personal view.
I'd have also considered a solo section in the middle that lifted the track a bit in terms of energy, and then returning back to the original mood for the rest of the track.
Again, a personal view.

Look forward to more uploads.

ChrisWerner · Post by **ChrisWerner** » Fri Jan 23, 2004 10:54 pm

Hiya Alan,
this is a great track and I really enjoied it with Neil.
Dont believe any word of Neil, he always said it isnt raining in England but it does.

Anyway, back to the track, that is a great text and you have a really nice voice.
The track is very well crafted and simply sounds smooth to me.
Personaly I would try to us a more wooden sounding real bass sound on this and in the middle of the track I would built in a small solo part.
Enjoied it.

[ This Message was edited by: ChrisWerner on 2004-01-23 22:56 ]