the way it should be

Gordon Gekko · Post by **Gordon Gekko** » Mon Sep 15, 2003 6:23 pm

This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Electronic copyright ©2003 laurent molini _____________________________________ this is aother draft of a song done right after i got installed in a new place following a fire that happened at my old flat and destroyed my life early this summer. To ease pain, i bought back gear and found the best looking place available for my confort and the musicians i hang out with. the way it should be... i feel like it is near finish and would like to get input from you as to what you'd see to make it complete

[ This Message was edited by: legros on 2005-11-25 11:08 ]

Post by **Neil B** » Wed Sep 17, 2003 1:02 am

Nicely mixed, nice ideas, great instrumentation.
For my own personal tastes I'd have liked to hear some high strings (simple) as a sort of counter harmony to the bass line and vocals in a couple of places.

paulrmartin · Post by **paulrmartin** » Wed Sep 17, 2003 7:53 am

One of the best tracks on the "Z".

When I read Neil's review I thought there was a lack of a static element. I disagree. The echo on the voice acts as the static element countering all the dynamism of the marimba and bass.

Don't change a thing, legros

Gordon Gekko · Post by **Gordon Gekko** » Wed Sep 17, 2003 12:45 pm

guys, you just made my day thanks! well i don't know what to do... Neil says strings Paul says not to touch it. Problem is with the song lenght - 2:20 a bit short. but i don't know how to strech it

paulrmartin · Post by **paulrmartin** » Wed Sep 17, 2003 2:02 pm

Don't. The song is a statement not an elaboration

kensuguro · Post by **kensuguro** » Wed Sep 17, 2003 8:35 pm

ah, the drums really nail it. love the ambience. Guess the drums and bass line really work together. Hey, but it's great to hear you're getting your life back. I could only imagine how tough it must have been to get everything back up and running after you've lost it all. cheers dude!

ChrisWerner · Post by **ChrisWerner** » Thu Sep 18, 2003 5:41 am

Simply... Bravo

It´s good to have you back in my mind with your music. You´ve got a fan.

[ This Message was edited by: ChrisWerner on 2003-09-18 06:44 ]