Hi Sub,
this way I must say it's better off without drums.
You're right, rhythmicly there is something wrong, and I can't say what exactly coz you kept the beat in the background.
I think you would be shocked (?) if you would hear how hard I would put the beat in it...
My fingers are itching (like we say here)...
I was asking for a beat coz your beautifull song (ah the synth sound!) isn't really setup and arranged as a pure ambient song, as I see it.
It has the character of an extended long intro or break, to effectively climax.
The longer the song evolves, the harder I expect a great happy clubbeat, so to say to confirm the appealed happiness.
But no harm: like someone said already, for a dj this could be a perfect song to make a great live mix, so nothing wrong with it .
Be happy
note: *if* you anyway go for another loop, seach indeed for a 'swingtime' loop, shuffle so to say.
I think it will fit best to the trioles of the delays.
You could slice up any loop and trigger the slices with midi notes which you can shuffle-quantize.
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Let There Be Music!
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