... maybe the band exchanged the thinger... ? oops

the 'background' is great, but leaves few room for the afforementioned protagonist, imho it's somewhat as if he sticks his head from behind through a wall of instruments, struggeling to get noticed
which only works on fairly good playback gear (like those all-revealing-little-Sennheisers that suck because they are applied almost inside the brain).
With more 'relaxed' stuff like my AKG 301 (or the 'boxy' Roland DS30s) the 'song' has problems to get over.
too much ssss in the voice anyway, but that's not your fault... you'd hide him even more if you'd steal the brightness from the voice.
cheers, Tom
ok, I understand the words, but that doesn't make me completely biased, no it doesn't... I hope he didn't mean your 'price', Roman
