well, I've never attended a figure skating competition 'live', but considering the horrible TV sound, I doubt this track will work...
the musical ideas (that have to support the skater in the first place anyway) are fine imho, and i agree on the pictured flow of movements.
my most important concern is about the use of reverb/delay, the 'decaying' snares in particular.
that's perfect in a 'dry' studio/living room environment, but an 'empty' skating hall has a ton of long delays on it's own...
piano as 'lead voice' works very good under these conditions, the arpeggio like lines may need just a little more substance to properly 'guide' the spectator (as the hall will thin them out)
the jazzy piano at the end is completely misplaced imho (stereo sample/phase issues/panorama?)
As a kind of tension climax it's not such a 'familiar' tone in this context and adds individuality to the performance if it appears more upfront.
Imho such a mix is rather demanding, as there's an acoustically extreme destination (and possibly additional broadcast requirements).
I've seen more than once that a badly selected (or performed) music put a skater/couple back.
On the other hand the 102nd version of Carmen or the 212th Conquest of Paradise are a kind of boredom on their own - though they usually serve their purpose well in catching the audience...
cheers, Tom