Underwater

H-Rave · Post by **H-Rave** » Tue May 02, 2006 12:20 pm

<a name="planetz-file"></a><a href="http://www.planetz.com/Pulsar/files/mus ... .mp3"><img src="/forums/images/listen_icon.gif" border="0" alt=" Song"> Song</a> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Acoustic <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects Chris Blake-Richard Hargrave _____________________________________ This is one of my first attempts.I am ready to be shot down in flames.Constructive criticism of the song is very welcome.
It's an instrumental played by Chris Blake and recorded by myself on SX3

kensuguro · Post by **kensuguro** » Tue May 02, 2006 12:55 pm

click track maybe, to tighten up the timing a bit... and too much fret noise for me. I like the atmosphere tho, it's got a gentle, sincere atmosphere..

___crisis___1 · Post by **___crisis___1** » Tue May 02, 2006 2:00 pm

i agree with too much fret noise. a little bit sounds good, but this was a little overdone. timin was a little off as well... but a good sound overall... thought about laying down some drums? i won't really know how good it sounds till there are some drums... i am more of a percussion person myself

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___crisis___1 · Post by **___crisis___1** » Tue May 02, 2006 2:02 pm

ok... after reading my reply... i have to elaborate. the timing was not off, there was just a few slipped notes here and there.

braincell · Post by **braincell** » Wed May 03, 2006 4:24 pm

Perhaps the faults are more obvious because it is solo guitar with no other instruments.

H-Rave · Post by **H-Rave** » Fri May 05, 2006 3:58 am

Thanks guys.Ok,I admit it was rather half-hearted.We'll probably redo it properly with more precision.We're going to churn another one out,but this time finished with pain-staking Trevor Hornitude.