This has real potential Leper
Like a couple of others mention, the drums need some work, but you've nailed the vibe if not the complete sound.
We listened to the track straight, then started playing with filtering it & messing it up. Something you could possibly try (to make it more sonically intrigueing) is filter sweep either parts of it or the whole thing, leaving space for other (new) drum elements to be swept in or out, which is part of what makes work by talented D&B producers like T-Power, Spring Healed Jack & many others, so sonically awe inspiring. !
I think you've got a great 'core' sound to what could be an excellent interpretation of the genre.