A new one... also breaks...

___crisis___1 · Post by **___crisis___1** » Fri Dec 23, 2005 4:23 pm

<a name="planetz-file"></a><a href="http://www.planetz.com/Pulsar/files/mus ... .mp3"><img src="/forums/images/listen_icon.gif" border="0" alt=" Song"> Song</a> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Breaks <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Mixers copyright © 2005 CRiSiS _____________________________________ here is a new i just got done with... i used an ms2000r to vocode my voice for part of the melody... let me know what you think!

kensuguro · Post by **kensuguro** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 5:35 am

dunno if it's your locale.. why the electro 8 beat pattern? anyhow, it's an okay little tune. I would prefer some more variation, or atleast some more material. I can imagine some pop lock people going wild over this track tho. Especially in europe where boogal shrimp (or bogaloo) style pop locking is still big.

If you're going old school electro style, then I'd make use of some more of the classic pop-lock drum patterns and make variations from there. Where are you based?

[ This Message was edited by: kensuguro on 2005-12-25 05:36 ]

Post by **hubird** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 5:58 am

On 2005-12-25 05:35, kensuguro wrote: Especially in europe where boogal shrimp (or bogaloo) style pop locking is still big

boogal shrimp (bogaloo) style pop locking ?? In Europe? what might that be?

Gringo language?

[ This Message was edited by: hubird on 2005-12-25 06:08 ]

kensuguro · Post by **kensuguro** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 6:12 am

it's like a specific style of robot dancing. Boogal Shrimp is the guy that started it. He's like an old guy who set the robot dancing scene back in the 80's. Now that specific style of robot dancing is named after him.. Boogal. Think back to the time of Planet Rock, by Africa Bambaata.

___crisis___1 · Post by **___crisis___1** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 11:25 am

i didn't really have any style in mind... this is just what came out. i am not to the point in my production career that i can make a song sound a certain way... i just sit down, and let it all come out. this is what i thought was sounding good.

i am based out of reno, nevada usa

Post by **hubird** » Mon Dec 26, 2005 4:27 pm

thanks for explanation Ken

Spirit · Post by **Spirit** » Fri Dec 30, 2005 6:22 pm

Reminds me a little of early Gary Numan. Definitely needs a bit more to it though and another look at the mix. I'd make it a 2:30 minute track and put the rather nice break up front and perhaps make a variation of it as the intro.

King of Snake · Post by **King of Snake** » Wed Jan 25, 2006 1:15 am

It's not bad but there is one thing i would pay attention to with your next production: repetition, there's too much of it. Don't loop the same section for more than a few bars, you could easily cut out half of this track without losing any of the content. It's really a common "mistake" because i used to do the same thing. When i listen to my old tracks now, I always think "i could have taken out all this stuff here and it would have made the song better".