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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 7:36 am
by mr swim
This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <BR><BR><a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Electronic<BR> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects,Pulsar Mixers,Pulsar Synths<BR> copyright © 2002 Will McNeill<BR> _____________________________________<BR><BR> This started life as music for a digital video installation done by a friend of mine. I then knocked it into a tune before going to the states last year. I've just dug it up, and am not sure what to do with it. I think I'll scrap what's after 4.29 but what do y'all think ? Is it worth my time messing about with etc etc.

Thanks for you comments,

Will.

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 10:00 am
by hubird
It's great!!
If this is done live, it's done very well :smile:

And you're right, in the second part you loose grip, and that's not worth it.
Not that's really bad or stupid from there on, but there are volume problems, too mutch orchestration, and less consistancy.
Skip it, and you'll win Image

I think Borg will add this to his list :wink:

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 12:16 pm
by borg
fantastic!!!

absolutely one for in my fav folder... and i wouldn't change it a single bit, from a compositional point of vue. maybe some level changes in the last third, yeah, but it sounds great as it is.
skipping the last part would make the track unfinished imo.
thank you.

so cut the crap and tell us your REAL artist's name and which label you have released your stuff on...

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 12:33 pm
by mr swim
! ! ! ! :smile:

Cheers guys.

Hubird - not done live . . . I'm awful at that sort of thing, but it was done pretty quickly: at least, the first draft was . . .

Borg you crack me up man !

And I wasn't thinking of just snipping off the last bit, but just starting again with it. If its just the levels then I won't though. So I'll do some fiddling on them and see. I'm just not sure if it isn't a bit too much of an anticlimax after 4 minutes of building.

Anyway, thanks for the support you two,

Will.

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 12:50 pm
by Submarine
Sounds so clear and fresh for me...very interesting Track :smile:)

Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 2:21 am
by petal
This is really cool me thinks, and yes I think it is deffinitely worth working on! - made me think of "Mouse on Mars".
I really liked the intensifying composing of this track. The percusionpart is also really cool too, and your basswork is great too.
About scraping the last two minutes. I don't think the last two minutes are bad, but I think the track would stand out stronger, if it stopped while it was on it's top, but I also like the way it ends now - Not much help, but these were my thoughts :wink:

Great work!
Thomas :smile:

Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 6:50 am
by mr swim
Cheers Sub . . .

Petal - I think I might well go for the 'shorter stronger' approach, that's a good idea.

Well I'd better get working !