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new track
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 10:11 am
by widy
just a new new track
(style... hmm....ambience dupstep piano mix)
http://soundcloud.com/widy75/world-conflicts
not realy finished jet ... so any kind of suggestions for improvements are welcome
lg widy
Re: new track
Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:49 am
by ChrisWerner
I hear two opposite elements in your track, the beat element with 'aggressive' sounds and the pads with the piano create a soft laid back element. The combination of both is nice and if this would be my track I would work out these elements a bit more.
Means, I would starts with the piano like you do in the outro, bring in the pads and surprise your audience with the second aggressive element introducing the beat.
Due the track last I would change from one element to the other from time to time and think about a cutter sound or element for the change. Closing the track with the piano alone fading away would create a nice arrangement.
But it's just what I have in my mind.
Constructive purity !
Re: new track
Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 1:40 am
by widy
thx for the feedback ..... i will think about it
more or less this was also the first real test for my new setup with reaper and sc5.1 64
setup of both was a realy hard way but at the end it seems to work fine.
lg widy
Re: new track
Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:18 am
by HUROLURA
I like this one very much ...
Could easily become a soundtrack.
The idea of Chris would also be nice, so just follow his suggestion.
Actually I really like the ambiance of the pads and beats.
Maybe just start witth the piano with a really soft pad background (aetheral) and then break into the more agressive pad.
Once again, this one sounds really great.