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Posted: **Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:01 pm**

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Should have been wiht Thalamus´s last post, but something went wrong...

[ This Message was edited by: TheGirl on 2005-07-04 14:06 ]

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Posted: **Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:47 pm**

Very interesting! would be good if you and Noah came together for composing a more structured tune, but your contribution here absolutely sounds like summer to me!

Keep up the good work Girl!

Besrt regards,
Piddi

Posted: **Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:54 pm**

guess you came together allready

Posted: **Tue Jul 05, 2005 12:22 am**

lovely

Posted: **Wed Jul 06, 2005 4:16 pm**

Pleasant voice. Nice harmonies. You have a lot you could work with. The words struck me as rather bland and ordinary. Try to make the words stranger and the melody too. I like songs where the meaning isn't totally clear and the melody is not predictable.

Posted: **Thu Jul 14, 2005 5:34 am**

Very nice voice and interisting choir lines. Go on that way and don't hesitate to offer more of your songs moreover don't hesitate at all.

Greets

DT

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