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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 7:53 pm
by Bracelet Z
This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <BR><BR><a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: POP<BR> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Everything<BR> copyright © Bracelet<BR> _____________________________________<BR><BR> Hello guys!
That's what I have recently recorded. Comments are appreciated.
Sincerely,
BraceletZ
Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:56 am
by geoffd99
Very nice, very musical.
Comments: I find the clap/snare sound a bit harsh or loud for the style, and generally the rhythm seems to be too strong and angular for the rest of the track, but not propulsive enough. Pop appeal might be better if the beat is smoother? Or is this a remix, in which case ignore the above comments?
Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 11:41 am
by Lima
Very Pop IMHO.
Fresh style and the melody is simple and effective. Mix is very nice and the voice is clear.
The only criticism I can move is it sounds a bit like "already listened" in my opinion, but I must admit that I find this "feeling" in many pop tracks nowadays...
To make it sounds a little more original, why not trying to add something in the second strophe?
Anyway a very clean and nice work!