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This piece Tine (the vocalist) wrote, and I really feel in love with it.

What I posted is a idea of a production, that should describe the words in music.

USES: STM1632, Three-O-Three, FLEXOR for drums (which I just bought, and WOW...is this an amazing tool), Vinco, STW 4080L, CompressorX, Minimax. Z3ta+. And lots of UAD plugz

I really like your comments on this. Thanks

Very interesting drum track. Really like those sounds. But it seems to me the vocal and drum parts don't sonically fit together so well. Is it the EQ ? Some sort of frequency band seems missing or something... Sorry to be so vague.

Also, I hope you don't mind me saying but the lyrics are very cliched. "Don't go; don't leave me; I know you have to let go; All that I have is you." etc A shame to waste such a nice voice on such forgettable words. *Something* in there desperately needs to say a few things new.

Despite saying all this I feel that this could be a real commercial success with some ruthless surgery. I can easily imagine this on high-rotation radio...

I really like the the backing track - but the vocals just didn't seem to fit.
They seem too clean (???) and they don't sit within the gated vacuum you have created. The combination of the two seems to create a big sonic hole in the mix - which *could* be a really great thing - but just not working at present.

Sorry this isn't much help, basically I like the music but don't think much of the vocal track at this point. Not that the vocalist isn't talented - she sounds great, but something isn't right about the combination.

Hmm, if I understood it right, this is a song about somebody she loves but unfortunatly he or she has to die and she sings, please don´t go, you´re everything I have and so on.

This should be a more sadness driven track, to sing somebody your love, thanks and wishes to stay are not fiting to this production. I don´t feel any sadness or powerless or hopelessly emotions in her singing or in the music.
It sounds like her other tracks I´ve heard, clean, good, a bit emotionless.

Try to bring her to scream, what you think?
She will like it, screaming for a while really makes you feel good. Her text or sentences should be an order to somebody to let her love survive and stay with her.
When you find a way, I´m sure that this track could be a good follower to your hit.