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Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 9:07 am
by Ricardo
This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <BR><BR><a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Acoustic with samples<BR> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar + SX<BR> copyright © 2004 Richard Morrison<BR> _____________________________________<BR><BR> I hope you enjoy!

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2004 11:44 am
by Submarine
Ricardo, i like your song,its full of scenes,
themes and atmos. The first time i thought its simple.The griffs, accords and sequences are this maybe but you understood how to arrange them together and buildt a very good song.Just one thing i didnt like and this is that the guitar is too much panned to the left side.Or not?What are the other thinking?
Nice song.:wink:

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 3:55 am
by Neil B
Near perfect to my ears. Great structure, arrangement, choice of sounds and feel to it all.

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 6:49 am
by Ricardo
Thankyou +++++ to you both.:smile:
Someone played me a Nick Drake CD which had the guitar panned to one side and left so much space for the vox in the mix, that's why I did it, and it sounded much better than stereo panned. It took a long while to get things to sit nicely in this mix, so I am very grateful for your comments.
Do you think the vox should be doubled in the later part of the song?

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 7:22 am
by calippo
I also liked this song very much. I just discovered Nick Drake for me and listen to his records a lot. Your song has quite a similar melancholic atmosphere to the "Five Leaves Left" songs, and the vocals are very nice.
The panning of the guitar doesn´t disturb me that much. Well done.

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2004 8:50 pm
by Nestor
The panning did not bother me, because despite the fact it really is quite at left, there is nevertheless and good balance, so I find it nice like this…

Warm voice, cool feelings…

It’s difficult to answer your question about doubling or not the voice by the end… I think if you do, you should also change a bit the character orchestrating it differently to match. I think it is nice as is really…

I would nevertheless like a more special guitar, and slightly brighter to hear it more, it’s beautiful and is a bit lost behind the piano.

Cheers, beautiful song, keep doing this like this, PLEASE!

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2004 5:50 am
by Ricardo
Thanx a million for the encouragement and positive comments. I hope my next projects are as well received.