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Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 10:31 am
by Alan Lauris
This file has expired and is no longer available here. The owner of the topic can re-upload the file, or post a link to an off-site file. <BR><BR><a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Electronic<BR> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects,Pulsar Mixers,Pulsar Synths<BR> copyright © Lauris/Coughlan<BR> _____________________________________<BR><BR> New song!! first collaboration with lyricist John Coughlan. Used Prisma for the bass-sound and added some sounds from the Chicago-subway. More Pulsar-made songs on my site
http://www.alanlauris.com.
Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 9:11 pm
by Nestor
Your bass does not work, sorry.
I liked the song very much, everything in fact, except the bass. I think it is too persistent, I mean, the preset you have chosen. I would like definitely, some deep bass, the patters makes it tiresome. It is a shame, cos the song is just perfect. It is nice for relaxing and enjoying the moment... but this bass is far too persistent and your voice looses a bit its own presence.
I would change exclusively the preset, not the bass line, cheers
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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 3:53 am
by Alan Lauris
Thanx for your comment, I'll consider trying another preset.
The link didn't work indeed, this is the right one:
http://www.alanlauris.com
Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 8:55 am
by Submarine
Well,i like this song,good voice record,i like the Bass preset too but it can be for me
-3/-4dB slighter.Good melody too.Well done.
Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2004 2:36 am
by Neil B
This is excellent. I really like this and your recent "Wet Kisses" track.
The mix is excellent (as it stands).
I don't like the bass patch as Nestor said and after a time I found the side stick beginning to sound like a click track, but that is my personal view.
I'd have also considered a solo section in the middle that lifted the track a bit in terms of energy, and then returning back to the original mood for the rest of the track.
Again, a personal view.
Look forward to more uploads.
Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2004 10:54 pm
by ChrisWerner
Hiya Alan,
this is a great track and I really enjoied it with Neil.
Dont believe any word of Neil, he always said it isnt raining in England but it does.
Anyway, back to the track, that is a great text and you have a really nice voice.
The track is very well crafted and simply sounds smooth to me.
Personaly I would try to us a more wooden sounding real bass sound on this and in the middle of the track I would built in a small solo part.
Enjoied it.
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